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CE: I can kiss away the pain

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The inspiration lines!(©Enrique iglesias)
"I can kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever
You can take my breath away"


Here is my Contest entry *Silvyy<3
This took time, and my hand just died. I made the hole shading on Harm, all the scales+the rest of the bg and details today/now:faint:
Well they´re not kissing here, more 2 seconds from xD And they´re actually not doing anything yet....:)
But I like the way it came out, and the hair looks kind of electric in my eyes:XD: But hope you like it!:lol:-My food sleeps O.O" I hate that feeling...."Zzzhhhhh"*Shakes it*
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Flame flew quietly down to Harm. There were a lake nearby them.
Harm walked down to the lake, and looked down in the clear water. The starlit night sky mirrored in the water.
Flame walked to Harm. He sat beside her, and they looked at each other and kissed.
Harm flew to a waterfall near them, and Flame followed her immediately. They rubbed each other. Flame could smell Harms hair, and he licked her chick carefully.Harm walked into the waterfall, and sat down. She looked at flame while smiling at him, and then he smiled back, and lay down beside her.
they both felt the fresh water on their soft bodies. Then they warmed each other, and felt each others warm breath in the cold air, while they got surrounded by small fireflies.
then they kissed intense...

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Sorry about if there´s any mistakes ^^;
Only *Silvyy can use this by giving credit!
Harm©*Silvyy
Flame©Sierra studios etc.
Art and the little story©Me :3
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VanillaHellen's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Okay, first time ever I give someone so many stars Õ_Ô
Anyway, this is one of the best works I have EVER seen from you! This vision here is awesome, atmosphere is so romantic... <3

I love how you did the perspective. Idea with image's contortion was great! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Now.
What I like in this pic are:
*poses, they're awesome. Expecially Harm's, it's pretty original. I love her wings <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" title="Love"/>
*expressions, they really fit to whole pic. Their expressions are reflecting every emotions! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
*BG, expecially the sky! It's so detailed o3o

And on what you should work:
*scales, they looks like you've done them too quickly and casually <.< Harm's scales can be, but Flame's (expecially those on arms) are pretty inaccurate <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":noes:" title="Noes!"/>
*water. It'd be awesome but those highlines are a bit too visible...

and lil' other:
*moon. It looks like you used brushes for it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":noes:" title="Noes!"/> If you don't, then you're my new master-of-doing-moon <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD"/> And if you do, then... I don't know <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD"/> It's just I don't like when someone is using brushes <.< But it's only my mind :3

So, in few words, this pic ROCKS, it's super-romantic and awesome done, poses and expressions are WIN. But you should really work on scales. I mean, make them a bit longer ^^