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Artomis commission by Amirah-the-cat Artomis commission by Amirah-the-cat
Here is full detailed/more realistic commission, without bg for *Artomis :)
But since he was kind of the first who requested a commission from me, I thought he deserve a bg on it ^^

This took time. I actually started on this 2-3 months back, but I got some other business too, so I only got Xale´s head details(scales and shadows) finnish, long time ago. But well I hope u like it.
I gotta go :3 And sorry, but I always make very messy bg´s...Sorry >_>

Only :devsartomis: may use this!!!! etc.

Xale©*Artomis
Art© Me/Amalie P/Atc
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First of all, I must say this is really my first crituique ^^;

I figured since it was a pic for me, I would give you one though. To start, I must say I'm amazed by your work yet again! Every pic I see from you, you're getting better and better at your artistic skill! ^_^

Now onto the pic, As for Xale himself, I have absolutely nothing to say about him. You drew him perfectly. His expression fits his personality so well, and I was surprised at how well done his head fins and chest were done! Color is perfect, wings are beautiful, and the tail *dies*

I love the BG as well, but this is where I see a few flaws. The things I really like about it is that you have the haze in the air, causing the blur for the distant islands and mountains. Perfect idea to have crystals and the sun setting, really sets the mood for the picture ^_^

For the negatives, the blur effect seems to hurt the picture as much as it helps. The closer grass (I believe, at least) should be more clear, but I know how that's really limited (and I'm not really one to talk since I can't even do BG's >_<) The other thing I notice instantly is the trees. The tops are fine (once again, a bit blurry closer up, though), but the bases are a bit funky with those lines running all up and down them, and the last tree on the right being a solid brown for the trunk makes it look a bit odd. Overall, these don't take away much from the effect of the picture, just things to be noted, I think.

Go ahead and kill me if you feel I am too picky ^^; It was points well spent and as soon as I can, I plan on getting another commission off of ya! :D

Once again, you're amazing, and now I'm off to hug this picture and die because of the epicness :XD:
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Dragoninthehouse109 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. NOW THAT YOU'VE STARTED READING, DONT STOP. THIS IS SO FREAKY. 1 say your name 10 times 2. say your mum's name 5 times and your crushes name 3 times 4. paste this onto 4 other games. If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday possible. But if you read this and do not paste this, you will get bad luck. SEND THIS ON 5 DIFFERENT GAMES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE, PRESS F6 AND YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT ACTUALLY WORKS
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BlazingDragon101 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
IT'S YOUNG VOLTEER!! ;) ;)
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Artomis Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
you know, im just seeing this now, as the owner of Xale i was like wtf?! O.o; but then i laughed my ass off... he kinda does look like him doesnt he?
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suppari Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist
AWW THAT'S WONDERFUL:iconeepplz:
THOSE WINGS ARE LOOOOVELY *W*
AND SCALES ARE AWESOME 8D
SUPAH WELL DONE ;D ESPECIALLY THE WINGS 8D
AMAZING BACKGROUND ASWELL ;D I LIKE THAT GRASS:iconilikeitplz:
AND AGAIN THE COLOURS :dummy:
I LOVE THAT EYE X'3 AND THE EXPRESSION :iconmecutelove:
BUT THE COLOURSSS~~ :icondragonwant: SOOO PRETTYNESSS~
XALE LOOKS AWESOME THERE 8D
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
Aww it's really beautiful! <3
Expression here is great.. And I love this BG so muchly :noes:
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darkdra Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
Amiraaaah ;A;
It's so beautiful! I can't believe you've improved so much since you came to DA! :la:
...I'm seriously thinking about commissioning you :iconteheplz:
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Amirah-the-cat Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Student
Aww, that´s mucho sweetie of you:iconteheplz: Thank you so much *3* And I´ll love to do a commission for you!:iconimhappyplz:
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armoredlightdragon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
eipc pic
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thezipmiester Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Wow! I love the bg and expression C:
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Temorali Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Student General Artist
That's truly stunning! AMAZING work!
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